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Dialogue vs. Exposition in a Scene
Readers are now less tolerant of large blocks of text setting scenes or laying background for pages on end. But too much dialogue can make a reader feel disconnected from the fictional world. How do we strike the right balance?
By making the reader feel like an active participant in the story instead of an observer. They need to witness both what is said and what is left unsaid to feel the tension in the scene.
How to Use Scenes to Build Plot
Ever read a story where it was clear the character did something because that’s what the story (i.e. author) wanted them to? It’s annoying, and readers do notice.
The best stories feel like the character is real, making their own choices as they navigate the story.
So how do we make a fictional world feel real to a reader?
One word: Consequences.
Using Scenes to Establish Setting
Setting is critical in the first few lines so the reader is immediately oriented in the story and can begin to imagine the scene playing out. Without enough detail, readers cannot imagine the world that you — the author — can see so clearly in your head.
A scene needs to happen someplace, but if we use that location and the environment around the main character to work against their goals, stories can reach new depths...
Why Does Fiction Need Scenes?
Whether you’ve written the story in a flurry of a first draft, or you’re still planning the story you want to write, the quickest way to take your writing to the next level is to focus on developing strong scenes.